“Sweet Caroline”

Carol A. Hand

Clickety-clack clickety-clack
My brother’s only one
Clickety-clack clickety-clack
My mother’s on the run
We’re on a train to Texas
She hopes the abuse is finally done

train

Photo: Passenger Train from the 1950s

Clickety-clack clickety-clack
Open plains are rolling by
Clickety-clack clickety-clack
I watch my mother cry
Clickety-clack clickety-clack
Mile after mile
There’s no one else to comfort her
So I try to make her smile

Clickety-clack clickety-clack
Will this journey never end
Clickety-clack clickety-clack
I could use a friend
Passengers try to make me smile
Calling me “Sweet Caroline

Clickety-clack clickety-clack
Little do we know
Clickety-clack clickety-clack
There are many more miles to go
As my father follows us to New Mexico
Arizona, and finally Lac du Flambeau

Clickety-clack clickety-clack
My mother sobs, my brother cries
Clickety-clack clickety-clack
I vow to protect her
From my father’s blows
Beneath Wisconsin skies

The tracks of hoped for salvation
Are but a memory past
It took another forty years
For my mother to be free at last

Acknowledgements:

Neil Diamond, “Sweet Caroline

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About Carol A. Hand

What matters are not the titles I’ve held or university degrees I earned or the size of a house or bank account. It’s really what I’ve learned from ordinary people like me whom I’ve met along the way. They taught me to live with gratitude and give thanks for each new day.
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14 Responses to “Sweet Caroline”

  1. Strong emotional poem, well done!

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  2. A nice synthesis of folksong, ballad and modern popular song. Using the onomatopoeia of the train on the track creates a nice looping rhythm. And it’s accessible poetry, something we need more of these days.

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    • Thank you for such thoughtful comments, Art. The inspiration to write is a strange phenomenon. This came from a melody and words that kept playing through my thoughts this morning. I recognized the voice (Neil Diamond), but not the song. When I found it on youtube, the title of the song unlocked memories of the sound of the train when I was four as we traveled across the country. The words just flowed like those of a child… It needs work, but it could be a good folk or country song.

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  3. One of my favorite tunes, Carol and you poem was powerful and well executed. Love, N 🙂 ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Rajagopal says:

    Memory-loaded words masterfully crafted into sounds of a moving locomotive. I really experienced that train journey of yours, Carol…best wishes.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Kennedy says:

    There are so many on the journey with Caroline. Poignant.

    Liked by 1 person

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